He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong


跪求答案,这句话有错,哪里错了,为什么
he had a deep... in our small town这个句子是对的,主句后面加一槐散个非限定性定语从句,这已经是一个完整告旦句子了,但后面没有任何连词的情况下,使用逗号,后面又加了一个句子。铅友氏犯了了语病,即,在一个句子中出现了两个谓语动词。

改正:
He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, and meanwhile, he was strong.