帮忙用英语翻译下面的句子.谢谢!

你能否问工厂要一份电子版的说明书.这样我才能正确地测试这台机器.
Would you please ask the factory for the electronic version of instructions so that I can/could test this machine correctly?
我自己翻译的,不是直接用软件直译的。
ask…纯族凯…for 向某人要求某样东西 ,这种用法比ask……from要恰当且常用
Would you please……? 你可以……吗?
so that 表示做了某些事后,做唤这样才能做…… 这个时候穗帆后面部分作为从句
test the/this machine 测试机器
correctly 副词,正确地。或者用rightly也行
Could you ask the factory for a digital version of the Users' Guide so that I can properly test this machine?
Could you ask for a electronic version of user manual from the factory? Then i can check this machine correctly.
Would you please ask for the electronic version of instructions from the factory so that I can test the machine correctly?
could you ask the factory for the electronic edition of instruction book?so that i can test the machine accurately
Would you please ask the factory for an electronic instruction? then I could test this machine correctly.