谁帮我看一下这篇英语短文有没有语法错误
这是一篇文章的结尾改编,大家帮我看
just then,a huge figure was moving silently towards the captain’s house. captain king was very afraid.he thought,was that gork? he peeked outside.it was real gork. gork also seemed to find him. soon gork started to damage his house. suddenly captain king ran into his car. he drived his car off. but gork still followed him. he entered a tunnel. gork was too large to cross the tunnel. gork was vey angry. but the soldiers arrived soon. gork had to fly away. captain was safe again.
我是一名初二学生，希望大家能帮我找一下其中的语法错误，并帮我修改一下，好的加分，呵呵
有纯陆一点点小错误啦~~修改了下~~
记戚凯得要做仔顷注意大小写吖！！
just then,a huge figure was moving silently towards the captain’s house. captain king was very afraid.he thought,was that a gork? he peeked outside.it was really a gork. the gork seemed notice him. soon the gork started to damage his house. suddenly captain king ran into his car and drove it off. following the gork, he entered a tunnel. the gork was very angry that it was too large to cross the tunnel. soont he soldiers arrived . the gork had to fly away. captain king was safe again.
我没看懂
好象是中式英语